New Prog Metal song, feedback please!

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Hello again everyone!

This is a new prog metal song I just recorded. what you guys think?? (still have to record some solos but didnt have the time), also is not a instrumental song... but haven't been able to find a singer and a drummer yet hehehehe. If you guys know anybody please let me know!

What you guys think of the song? And the guitar tone? Also I know that the mix still no good at all, I don't know why I haven't been able to make it sound full, It sounds thin I don't know how to explain it, but still need a lot of work hehehe.

https://soundcloud.com/garitos-e-thulu/pieces

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it goes nowhere......
needs a bit more melody


if it had a melodic line - the tone would probably work.

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Hi mamberg,

Yea you are right, is missing the vocals... the vocals should be the one doing the melodic line hehehe. Thank you!